Mayu, Well done and very clearly written. Now, you just need to add some quotations and some statistical information. So for Saturday, see if can find a newspaper article about your topic. I added your paper to the outline, so it is located after the outline. October 8, 2016 Mayu Kurusu OUTLINE To improve your quality of your trip Topic Sentence : Making a good preparation before trip is the most important thing to improve the quality of your trip. Adequate preparation before leaving on a trip is important. Therefore, it is important to consider the purpose of your trip, the type of trip and factors influencing your trip. A. purpose of your trip 1. A trip for leisure 2. A trip for seeing other people and cultures. 3. A trip for shopping. B. A type of your trip 1. Group tour guided by a tour conductor from beginning to end 2. A small group with a few of your close friend 3. Traveling alone C. Factors in choosing their destination. 1.Economical 2. Traveling time 3. Security Conclusion Sentence : Your trip will be a memorable one if you plan these three steps clearly before your trip.
October 8, 2016 Mayu Kurusu To improve your quality of your trip Making a good 1 preparation before trip is the most important thing to improve the quality of your trip. Many people take trips on their vacation to enjoy being in new places, 2 however, not too many people plan for their trips, and that makes their trips not enjoyable or satisfied. It will be great if trips are well planned, and that is easy to achieve with just a few steps as follows. People travel for many purposes. Making a decision of a purpose 3 of your trip is the first step you will do when planning your trip. Some people want to travel as a leisure to get away from their stressful daily life and relax. On the other hand, some people are interested in 1 adequate preparation 2 places; however, few people plan their trips which results in disappointment and dissatisfaction with the outcome. 3 The first step is for you to decide on the purpose of your trip.
seeing other local people and their culture. Still some people are just only interested in shopping, and they just buy anything that are designer brands or quality goods that they cannot get at in their home countries. For example, many Chinese people are visiting Japan to buy cosmetics or electric goods. An electric rice cooker is, among others, very popular, 4 for Chinese people. These are the three most popular purposes for traveling and your planning for a trip goes smoothly if you make your purpose of your trip clearly. 5 Once you have decided your purpose of traveling, next thing to do is that to choose a type of your trip the type of trip you want to take. There are three types of a trips to choose from. First type of a trip is a big group tour guided by a tour conductor from beginning to end. All you do is just follow a tour conductor with a flag in his hand to make sure you are not lost do not get lost. It s all prearranged Al the activities are prearranged. For instance, travelers normally eat at the restaurants contracted beforehand with travel agencies; furthermore 4 For example, an electric rice cooker is one of the popular items for Chinese tourists. 5 if the purpose of your trip is clear at the beginning.
as a result the taste is horrible of the food is not authentic but rather suited for the tourists. Through this way, you cannot really enjoy the best local food. The Second one type of trip is a small group tour with a few of your close friends. The Third one is alone travelingtravelling alone. An advantage to travelling alone is that A traveler can arrange his trip as he likes to, such as where to go and what to eat etc. However, in exchange for free travel this freedom, a person traveling alone is always putting himself at high risk such as of getting lost and having baggage lifting etc.stolen. Lastly, you will decide factors in choosing your destination. 6 The first thing to do is of course to choose destination. In choosing, consult with your wallet, consider the traveling time (also the length of your vacation) and security at the destination. Regardless of destination you chose, try to experience as many adventures as possible. Planning for a trip is a good way to avoid any unpleasant surprises. Planning will reduce chances of unlucky 6 Lastly, it is important to consider various factors before deciding on a destination, such as destination, travel time and expense.
accidents and make your trip memorable one.