APPENDIX 1 PERMISSION LETTERS

APPENDIX 1 PERMISSION LETTERS

APPENDIX 2 SCORING RUBRIC

Writing Scoring Rubric Recount Writing Rubric Aspect 1 pt 2 pts 3 pts 4 pts Content Content is fairly clear and somewhat stays on topic; a few details fit with the main idea. Content is clear and stays on topic; only some details fit with the main idea. Content is clear and stays on topic; all details fit with the main idea, but looks Content is clear, interesting, and stays on topic; all details fit with the main idea. Organization Grammar usage Structure Vocabulary Orientation and reorientation are not presented at all; sequence of events are not ordered in chronological order. Too many errors in using past tense. Too many errors in sentence structure Not controlled vocabulary Orientation or reorientation are not presented; sequence of events are ordered in chronological order, but sometimes keep attention Three or more errors in using past tense. Three or more errors in sentence structure Vocabulary is adequate usual Orientation and reorientation are presented; sequence of events are ordered in chronological order and usually keep attention One or two errors in using past tense. One or two errors in sentence structure Vocabulary is rich, but less precise Orientation and reorientation are clearly presented; sequence of events are ordered in chronological order and always keep attention No errors in using past tense. The sentences are wellstructured with no errors. Vocabulary is rich, purposefully selected, and very easy to understand.

APPENDIX 3 SAMPLE OF PRETEST TRY-OUT

APPENDIX 4 SAMPLE OF POSTTEST TRY-OUT

APPENDIX 5 SAMPLE OF PRETEST

APPENDIX 6 SAMPLE OF POSTTEST

Topic: Favourite Holiday Memory Prompt: You want to tell about your favorite holiday memory. The following questions will guide you in composing the text: 1. When did you go? 2. Where did you go? 3. Who did you go with? 4. What did you do? 5. How was your feeling? Don t forget to use past tense in your writing, and use correct generic structure including orientation (provides the reader with background information needed to understand the text. e.g. who, when, where), sequence of events (series of events typically ordered in chronological order), re-orientation (a summary statement/an evaluative comment/a personal opinion) Rafida 1 st draft MEMORABLE MOMENT AT PRIGI Last year, my drumband team from my school, MAN 3 Tulungagung planned to go on vacation to spend the holiday. We planned to go on Sunday morning and the destination is Prigi beach. Everyone on the team are joined. Including our supervisor and coach. We decided to gather at school before we left. On that day, I left to school and when I got there, I see some of my friends were arrived. After we got gathered, we pray to Allah swt, wish that our trip will on His protection. We finally departed by truck. Yes, truck. It s just usual, because everywhere the drumband team go, we always get in there. The trip was so pleased. Some of us were sat on the ground, while some stand up. I stand up myself. Some of us brought snacks and shared to everyone. Some boys were singing. Although their voice is a bit uh I can t say anything, but at least they re happy, I m happy, too. On the trip, I was so pleased by the view of different places. Because I seldom get out from my house, so it s so amazing that I can see so many places. Though it s just roads, ricefields, roads, ricefields. Something around that. But, when we almost reach the beach, we passed the roads throughout mountain. I got chilled there because of the low temperature. And the roads are up and down, up and down. It makes dizzy. Plus the temperature. After those hardship, we can finally see the beach. By the way, I heard that actually trucks can t carry people there. But luckily, nothing happened. We arrived there safely. But some of my friends can t held out and finally expend something from their mouth.

We arrived on the beach at noon. It s burned out there. But the beach was so beautiful. So many people went there. We held a mat on the warm sand under a tree and put our bags there. My friends immediately got in to the water. I didn t joined them because I don t want get wet. Then I and some of my girl friends took a walk and took some pictures. Some of my friends rode banana boat. I wan t to, but all seats were taken.after that we returned to the first spot, the mat. My coach and some of my friends were roasted chickens. After the chickens done, we got lunch. The taste was so good. While eating we chit-chatted. Then, after the lunch were done, we took group photos, and find some bathroom to clean ourselves and pray dhuhur. Some of my friends bought fishes for souvenir. We take rest for a while. Sat in some stall in the edge of coast. The view of afternoon was so beautiful. The water reflected sunlight and made it sparkle. The tide was low, so the rocks from underwater were revealed. We went home at afternoon. Passed on the same road before. But don t know why the trip feeled faster. Because the time s almost up, we stopped to a mushola for pray ashar and then returned our trip. And finally we arrived at school on evening. Right on maghrib. After that we went to ourselves home. This holiday feeled so impressive. I had lots and lots of fun. As you know, most of my friends are boisterous. Especially the seniors. They always knew how to make the atmosphere up, so it ll never be boring if you along with them. I ll never forget this forever. Rafida 2 nd draft MEMORABLE MOMENT AT PRIGI Last year, my drumband team from my school, MAN 3 Tulungagung planned to go on vacation to spend the holiday. We planned to go on Sunday morning and the destination is Prigi beach. Everyone on the team are joined. Including our supervisor and coach. We decided to gather at school before we left. On that day, I left to school and when I got there, I saw some of my friends arrived. After we got gathered, we prayed to Allah swt, wishing that our trip would on His protection. We finally departed by truck. Yes, truck. It s just usual, because everywhere the drumband team go, we always get in there. The trip was so pleased. Some of us sat on the ground, while some stood up. I stood up myself. Some of us brought snacks and shared to everyone. Some boys were singing. Although their voice was a bit uh I can t say anything, but at least they re happy, I m happy, too. On the trip, I was so pleased by the view of different places. Because I seldom got out from my house, so it s so amazing that I can see so many places. Though it was just roads, ricefields, roads, ricefields. Something around that. But, when we almost reach the beach, we passed the roads throughout mountain. I got chilled there because of the low temperature. And the roads were up and down, up and down. It made dizzy. Plus the temperature. After those hardship, we could finally see the beach. By the way, I heard that actually trucks

couldn t carry people there. But luckily, nothing happened. We arrived there safely. But some of my friends couldn t hold out and finally expended something from their mouth. We arrived on the beach at noon. It was like burned out there. But the beach was so beautiful. So many people went there. We held a mat on the warm sand under a tree and put our bags there. My friends immediately got in to the water. I didn t joined them because I didn t want get wet. Then I and some of my girl friends took a walk and took some pictures. Some of my friends rode banana boat. I wanted to, but all seats taken. After that we returned to the first spot, the mat. My coach and some of my friends roasted chickens. After the chickens done, we got lunch. The taste was so good. While eating we chit-chatted. Then, after the lunch done, we took group photos, and found some bathroom to clean ourselves and pray dhuhur. Some of my friends bought fishes for souvenir. We took rest for a while. Sitting in some stall in the edge of coast. The view of afternoon was so beautiful. The water reflected sunlight and made it sparkle. The tide was low, so the rocks from underwater were revealed. We went home at afternoon by Passing on the same road before. But I didn t know why the trip felt faster. Because the time was almost up, we stopped to a mushola for pray ashar and then returned our trip. And finally we arrived at school on evening exactly at maghrib. After that we went to ourselves home. This holiday felt so impressive. I had lots and lots of fun. As you know, most of my friends were boisterous. Especially the seniors. They always knew how to make the atmosphere up, so it would never be boring if you along with them. I ll never forget this forever. Topic: Favourite Holiday Memory Prompt: You want to tell about your favorite holiday memory. The following questions will guide you in composing the text: 1. When did you go? 2. Where did you go? 3. Who did you go with? 4. What did you do? 5. How was your feeling? Don t forget to use past tense in your writing, and use correct generic structure including orientation (provides the reader with background information needed to understand the text. e.g. who, when, where), sequence of events (series of events typically ordered in chronological order), re-orientation (a summary statement/an evaluative comment/a personal opinion)

Nufia 1 st draft MY VACATION IN YOGYAKARTA Two years ago when I was 2nd grade of Islamic secondary school I went traveled with my friends and teachers. We were traveled to Yogyakarta. In jogja we visited historic sites, beach center of souvenirs, etc. We went to Yogyakarta at night because the distance was very far. We gathered in the school at 7 p.m. And at 9 p.m. we set out by tourism bus. This first time I went traveled to Yogyakarta. I was very happy. On the way, lot of my friends had the ill because of colds. Arrived in Yogyakarta, we stopped by the restaurant for breakfast. After that, we continued the trip. The first destination was Borobudur temple. Evidently, Borobubudur temple was very large. The view from the top of Borobudur temple was very beautiful. The next destination was Parangtritis beach. We took a rest and dzuhur prayed in the mosque which near from the beach. After that we headed beach together. In the beach we prohibited to swim because the waves was quite large. But it was not matter, we enjoyed scenery and food. After visited Prangtritis beach, we headed to the Malioboro market. In there we bought souvernirs typical Yogyakarta such a clothes, bags, accessories, food, etc. After took a walk in Malioboro market, we spent the night in hotel. In the morning we had to check out from the hotel. The next destination was jogja palace. In the jogja palace, there ware many relics. We did not forget took pictures in the jogja palace.i was so tired. After visited jogja palace, we continued trip to Prambanan temple. At 4 p.m we arrived at the Prambanan temple. In the afternoon there was very beautiful scenery. There was one of temple in which a statue of Roro Jonggrang. Unfortunately, we can t got into because it was time to went back home. In the bus all asleep, maybe they were felt tired. I got home at 4 a.m. I was so happy and many unforgettable memories of Yogyakarta. Nufia 2 nd draft MY VACATION IN YOGYAKARTA Two years ago when I was 2nd grade of Islamic Junior School I went a travel with my friends and teachers. We travelled to Yogyakarta. In jogja we visited historic sites, beach, center of souvenirs, etc. We went to Yogyakarta at night because the distance was very far. We gathered in the school at 7 p.m. And at 9 p.m. we set out by tourism bus. This first time I went to a travel to Yogyakarta. I was very happy. On the way, lot of my friends had the ill because of colds. Arrived in Yogyakarta, we stopped by the restaurant for breakfast. After that, we continued the trip. The first destination was Borobudur temple. Evidently, Borobubudur temple was very large. The view from the top of Borobudur temple was very beautiful. The next destination was Parangtritis beach. We took a rest and dzuhur prayed in the mosque which near from the beach. After that we headed beach together. In the beach we

were prohibited to swim because the waves was quite large. But it was not matter, we enjoyed scenery and food. After visited Prangtritis beach, we headed to the Malioboro market. In there we bought souvernirs typical Yogyakarta such a clothes, bags, accessories, food, etc. After took a walk in Malioboro market, we spent the night in hotel. In the morning we had to check out from the hotel. The next destination was jogja palace. In the jogja palace, there were many relics. We did not forget took pictures in the jogja palace. I was so tired. After visited jogja palace, we continued trip to Prambanan temple. At 4 p.m we arrived at the Prambanan temple. In the afternoon there was very beautiful scenery. There was one of temple in which a statue of Roro Jonggrang. Unfortunately, we could t get into because it was time to went back home. In the bus all asleep, maybe they felt tired. I got home at 4 a.m. I was so happy and I got many unforgettable memories of Yogyakarta

APPENDIX 7 EDMODO LAY OUT